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Janet Reid, Literary Agent: AND the horse you rode in on!
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Janet Reid, Literary Agent. Life is short. Play with your dog."- CynthiaMc. Yes, this is filled with whisky. Monday, November 29, 2010. AND the horse you rode in on! In case you can't see the text of the letter accompanying the shredded rejection letter and envelope:. A man of my brilliance and talent should not suffer immediate form rejection letters. So fuck you and good luck in your future endeavors. With your 'judgment' you'll need it.". Labels: I love my job. 11/29/10, 3:45 PM. 11/29/10, 3:47 PM.
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Filk from the Three Broomsticks
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Filk from the Three Broomsticks. Many travelers arrive in London by train, while others choose to fly. London may also be reached by motorway, or by boat along the Thames. But when I find it necessary to visit the metropolis, I generally find it preferable to travel by invisible carnivorous reptilian flying horse. Most of these are by me (R. Smallburrow / Naill Renfro. Some are by Fool of a T. And Lupine-known-as-Dulcinea. I've marked my current favorites with a. Don't Know Much Arithmancy. To the tune o...
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Query Shark: #269-revised twice
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How To Write Query Letters . or, really, how to revise query letters so they actually work. Saturday, February 28, 2015. Sandra Lee Johnson's fledgling career as a government assassin may have been permanently derailed. This makes me think that Sandra is just a new assassin but later you write:. Sandra has survived for years as a killer-for-hire". All because of one man. You've solved almost all of the tone problem but it resurfaces here with "pet Islamist". Sandra managed to escape without being comprom...
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Query Shark: #261-revised 2x FTW
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How To Write Query Letters . or, really, how to revise query letters so they actually work. Sunday, June 29, 2014. Dear Query Shark,. Damn lie. Falling for a man’s tricks got her sent to the stoney lonesome in the first place, and now Nathaniel’s threatening to cook up a violation if she doesn’t get an abortion. He believes him too. Powerful men always get their way. They’d send her baby to foster care to grow up motherless, just like she did. 8220;A charming and often funny feature is the colorful (some...
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Query Shark: #264-revised once
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How To Write Query Letters . or, really, how to revise query letters so they actually work. Saturday, October 25, 2014. Comments are now closed on this post. Dear Query Shark,. Fia Colibri, 26, wants two things: to hide from her father and to recreate herself. Neither is possible. Her car breaks down and she’s stranded in East Ridge, North Dakota, a blip of a town near the Canadian border. Keeps us in the moment AND guides the reader to think "why is that not possible now? But it’s hard work stayin...
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Query Shark: #199-FTW
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How To Write Query Letters . or, really, how to revise query letters so they actually work. Sunday, March 20, 2011. Emily Jacobs, a senior at Maryland, is off for the summer. The last thing she remembers is walking through the woods by her parents’ Long Island home. Now she’s in a locked room, wearing strange clothing, with no idea when or how she got there. This last paragraph is the reason I chose this letter for QueryShark. I've never seen the problem of multiple viewpoints addressed quite this el...
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Janet Reid, Literary Agent: Industry question: this book is a train wreck, I'm a reviewer and novelist. HELP.
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Janet Reid, Literary Agent. Life is short. Play with your dog."- CynthiaMc. Yes, this is filled with whisky. Tuesday, August 04, 2015. Industry question: this book is a train wreck, I'm a reviewer and novelist. HELP. But as I read the novel I was astounded at the number of:. 1 Misused/incorrect colloquial terms. 4 locations/places either spelled wrong or the date (of a specific actual event) being incorrect. 5 out-and-out wrong general details. 6 storyline with several gaping chasms of plot holes. It too...
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Welcome to Frogmorton!
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A Lord of the Rings/Harry Potter filk. Is it time to mothball Frogmorton? That, although possibly amusing, was written in 2003. In the meantime almost everything added to this site has had to do with Harry Potter fandom (see photoshops below, and HP filk at The Three Broomsticks. Mostly, but not entirely, Harry Potter) and a LiveJournal under the name alaskaravenclaw. I (Robin Smallburrow) have a similarly pseudonymous LJ of my own, under the name Naill Renfro. And another of Goblet of Fire. Secret passa...
