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About Mary Lois Sanders | my other zone
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. About Mary Lois Sanders. My family and friends think I’m too busy to be a ‘retired person’ and they are correct. A writer never retires only chooses when to work and when to play. I choose to keep writing and play golf (lots). I’m not too bad at golf, actually. I have a 21 handicap and two holes-in-one (okay, I’m bragging a Diva-moment! And the winner is . The Creative Writer’s Notebook. I am also a musici...
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Revisions – Setting | my other zone
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. Revisions – Setting. According to Jordan Rosenfeld in her book. One of the key ingredients of any story, novel, or scene, is a rich physical setting that calls on all the senses and enables the reader to see and enter into the world you’ve created. [1]. Jordan recommends that the writer assume the role of tour guide describing what can be and should be. You want your reader to be. Setting for your story...
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Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014) | my other zone
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). The Luncheon – Brownies! These are addition photos just arrived from the Governor’s Mansion official photographer. Enjoy! Menu – Quiche Lorraine, and Mts. Scott’s own Chicken Salad recipe. Mary Lois and Tom with First Lady Ann Scott. MLS and First Lady Ann Scott. Secretary of State Ken Detzner, Co-Host of the Luncheon. 8220;Florida’s Finest” by W. Stanley Proctor. I like that la...
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my other zone | in search of a new voice | Page 2
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. February 21, 2012 3 Comments. Our county’s inspection office is rigorous and thorough. In fact, these people are notorious in the construction industry here in central Florida but that’s a good thing! Who wants to learn after-the-fact that that new roof wasn’t tied down according to the 1996 hurricane building regulations? I almost hate to move in, though. It’s so pristine and pure so glistening! There are...
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About My Blog | my other zone
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. I didn’t just get up one morning and say to myself I think I’ll start blogging today! I thought about it for at least a week! So why have I chosen to write one? Writers should write, and not just in their own comfort zones. My comfort zone though not an easy one to survive in is writing for children getting inside their heads, living their lives, seeing and hearing and feeling as they do. January 1, 2011 a...
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Enriching Your Narrative | my other zone
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In search of a new voice. About Mary Lois Sanders. Gallery (Updated 4.5.2014). Revisions – Setting. By Mary Lois Sanders and Sarah Nell Summers*. You have your story idea and its setting, but how do you write it so that your readers experience the characters, places, objects, sights, sounds and smells of the book’s world without info dumping? Simple, you weave. Description into your scenes organically. If not, how far are you willing to go to do so? Edwin Crisp, author of A Moving Toy Shop. Here’s a thou...
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