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Casino Nights
A ghost from a mans past leads him to a group of misfits trying to get off of the night shift at their job. Together, they must contend with an egotistical manager, and a mob boss that wants them dead. Thursday, March 8, 2018. EP 17: End Game. EXT A SUNNY DAY AT THE BALLPARK. EXT A SUNNY DAY AT THE BALLPARK. Boys are playing baseball. Parents are seated in lawn chairs surrounding the field - cheering their sons. A cellphone chirps from. Monas purse. Cash is on deck to bat next, his team is in the. Since ...
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(not so random acts of reality) | Not so random acts of reality
The Jeff Goldstein Blog. Not so random acts of reality). You don’t know what pretzels are…? In Actor's Life. On October 23, 2011. I am really sick and tired when:. I walk into a Duane Reade. Here in the middle of NYC. And I ask one of the workers there “where are the pretzels located? 8221;… and they DO NOT understand what the word “pretzels” mean. I order “Baked” meatloaf at a popular Greek diner. On the Upper West Side. Don’t they know meat loaf is juicy and soft. And to top it off…. Life is hard….
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Writing tips for word lovers » You can’t define it, but good writing makes all the difference in the world Writing tips for word lovers
Writing tips for word lovers. Parentheses and other brackets. Thursday, Nov 11 2010. When to use parentheses. I’ve seen writing that had one-third of the words buried between parentheses. And I’ve seen writing with no parentheses at all. Which did I like better? The one without the parentheses. These little punctuation marks slow down the reader and puts the text where they are buried on hold until the story appears on the right side of the material enclosed. 4 Too many parentheses. Unless you’...5 Not g...