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HelloFocus and Meaning STUDENT13, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 4 for focus. Focus relates to your ability to present a consistent, unified message and stay on topic. Your focus is adequate. Typically, a response at this level gives a fairly clear statement of purpose and wanders only slightly from the topic. STUDENT13, let's look at how you can make your writing better. As you get ready to revise, read your essay out loud so you can hear your ideas and words. After Re...
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