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MA's JournalDragged Kicking and Screaming into The Present. Mar 26th, 2010 at 9:05 AM. I got my manuscript back from Echelon (well, my electronic document) with passive voice and indefinite pronouns highlighted, and I'm going through it now rewording sentences. Example: We were removed from our horses. Changed to: Wardens pulled us off our horses. Better, yes? It's due to be released in electronic formats only this July by Echelon Press. If you want to read an excerpt (before edits, at this point), click here. I hav...
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