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Don’t Monkey with Grammar: Comprise vs Compose | Shades of Crimson
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Editing & Proofreading. Don’t Monkey with Grammar: Comprise vs Compose. January 3, 2013. The difference between comprise and compose. To help you understand when to use comprise and compose correctly in a sentence, let’s first look at their definitions. Means “to contain, to be made up of, to consist of or to include.” In essence, you would say that the whole comprises the parts. Means “to make up or to constitute.” In this case, the parts compose the whole. Comprise versus compose in a sentence. This us...
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5 Ways to Cut Wordiness | Shades of Crimson
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Editing & Proofreading. 5 Ways to Cut Wordiness. June 1, 2013. Cut your novel down to size. 6 Easy Ways to Cut Word Count. We discussed editing out weasel words. This post covers additional strategies for self-editing. 1 Moderate back story. 2 Dialogue tags: the less. Dialogue tags, such as. In my draft Deep Into Midnight. I used action and thoughts to identify the speaker, rather than writing. In this excerpt, a young girl in distress walks into the donut shop while Colleen is wiping the counter. Collee...
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Get Linked to LinkedIn. One of the most powerful, and proven business strategies of all time is the system of networking and building relationships. Building and maintaining a successful business is not something that can be done alone. There are many different elements that have to come together when growing a business, and those different elements will require you to seek outside help most of the time. If people who are within your network. Although primarily LinkedIn is a business-networking site, it ...
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Stick Your Neck Out Farther or Further? | Shades of Crimson
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Editing & Proofreading. Stick Your Neck Out Farther or Further? April 1, 2013. Confused about when to use farther or further? Do you find yourself sticking your neck out over commonly confused words? Well, after you read this post you will have a better understanding of when — or why — you may choose to use farther or further in a sentence. What is the difference between farther and further? When you look up the word “farther” in the. However, popular use and. The Associated Press Stylebook. We’ve ...
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Editing & Proofreading. Will Your Words Hook. Let Me Help You Light the Spark That Will Captivate Your Readers. Hold Their Attention From the First to the Last Page. Connecting with your words? The fact is that many writers fail to get published. Or stand out in the marketplace. Because they don’t connect with their audience. Those writers have sold themselves short, while others have succeeded because they hired a first-rate copy editor. Sadly, a large percentage of talented writers. Often, it only take...
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Moving Mountains with Writer’s Block | Shades of Crimson
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Editing & Proofreading. Moving Mountains with Writer’s Block. March 1, 2013. Thoughts on writer’s block. Opinions about writer’s block vary. Some say writer’s block doesn’t exist. While others suffer through it. I’ve read about causes of writer’s block, such as fear of failure or perfectionism, and solutions such as taking a break or reading a book. Before you claim to have writer’s block, consider what is going on for you. What are you resisting? This label is a mental block to creative thinking. Noneth...
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Amazing Split Test Results! Can You Pick The Winner? | Bret Thomson
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Full Day With Bret. February 14th, 2012 Bret Thomson. AMAZING SPLIT TESTING RESULTS. Can You Pick The Winner? See if you can pick the winning “Subject. Line” that got a whopping 54% increased. Open and click through rate than the other! I had an idea that sounded pretty insane. But I thought I’d give it a go anyway…. The risk of it not working… or being a raving success…. Believe it or not… lies in your hands. Then I had another ripper idea…. Ahh… the 3am brain snap ideas! So where was I? The email was p...
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Book Review: The Narcissist at Work | Shades of Crimson
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Editing & Proofreading. Book Review: The Narcissist at Work. November 17, 2012. Peace of mind on the job? 8220;Let’s face it: having to work closely with someone whose nasty ways make you feel like crap isn’t anyone’s idea of a good time. Interacting with these people at work is something we all suck up and do, but many of us don’t know how to neutralize the toxic behaviour to the point where it’s easier to bear.”. An awesome how-to guide for dealing with toxic people. The Narcissist at Work. How to iden...
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How to Learn Yoga | Capricorn Yoga
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Retreats & Workshops. How to Learn Yoga. Laquo; Yoga Styles. How to Learn Yoga. The best and easiest way to. Is by attending a yoga class. Chances are high that your local gym, school, university or community center offer yoga as part of their schedule. Costs vary and depend on the teacher or the establishment offering the class. As a ballpark figure you can expect to pay anywhere between a gold coin donation to about $15/lesson. Classes in the city are usually more expensive than rural. Yoga teaches us ...
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Retreats & Workshops | Capricorn Yoga
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Retreats & Workshops. How to Learn Yoga. Retreats & Workshops. We would love to see you at one of our popular retreats. Immerse yourself in the yoga lifestyle and rest, relax and rejuvenate at one of our retreats. The final retreat of 2016 is as follows:. Friday 7th – Sunday 9th, October 2016. The Capricorn Yoga Teachers will assist participants to explore and integrate a deeper sense of awareness and connection of body, mind and spirit leading to a more holistic practice. Lodge – $255.00.
