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Room 13 Writing: Ollie the Octopus - Meg McKay and Sarah Whitmore
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Thursday, July 3, 2008. Ollie the Octopus - Meg McKay and Sarah Whitmore. He also attracted sharks because he glowed in the dark sea water. So he thought why doesn’t he get plastic surgery? Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). Welcome to the Room 13 writitng blog. Here we will be posting pieces of writing to be reviewed and commented on. These pieces of writing will be in draft from and your help is going to be needed to comment and critique in order tyo make our pieces of writing better.
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Room 13 Writing: War Hero - Alex Phillips
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Tuesday, June 17, 2008. War Hero - Alex Phillips. Alex’s Big Bad Fight. 8220;Alex if can hear this you have past my test I won’t to finch this ones and for all we should meat at the park down by the lake” Alex got ready for tonight later that night they meat out side the park Tony came with a tank and Alex came with a helicopter. Finally the war is over and goes home to go to bed. Crazy crazy crazy but really good crazy. September 1, 2008 at 6:38 PM. November 11, 2008 at 4:23 PM. War Hero - Alex Phillips.
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Room 13 Writing: June 2008
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Thursday, June 19, 2008. Onaga Is Better Than "J Dog" - Jordan Scoullar-Lamb. ONAGA BLAZE TAVEN DAGON WINS! THEN TWO SORCERERES COLUD QUIN SHE SHAG TSIM CAME ROUND ONE FIGHT! ONAGA BLAZE TAVEN DAGON WINS FLAWISH WIN! Tuesday, June 17, 2008. Piggy in the Middle - Natalie Paterson. Piggy in the middle. Not like Moana pool in Dunedin this was a big blue lagoon surrounded by palm trees I woke everybody up but they just told me to go away and that they were trying to sleep. Even though it was only 5 pm! Once ...
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Room 13 Writing: The Deep Well - William Pelet
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Tuesday, June 17, 2008. The Deep Well - William Pelet. Look, there is a well, I never knew it was there,” says Charlie. “Neither did I,” replies his best friend David who was going on a long bike ride with him. Charlie suddenly says, "when we arrive back home, I could ask my Mum if we can explore it.” David then commented sarcastically, “yeah right.”. When Charlie arrives home he asks his mother the question. Charlie’s mother of course said no, being an overly protective mother. 29 minutes later…. At the...
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Room 13 Writing: May 2008
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Thursday, May 29, 2008. It was a dark night in the dungeon the only light was a small flaming touch on the wall on the corner was a Samaria prisoner asleep suddenly he got up and rushed to the door and took out a small pouch in his pocket and put it on the door and picked up his weapons and the touch and threw it at the door BANG the door had exploded (the pouch was pitch). I was the richest person in the world. I was rich because my mum and dad made custard. I help them. We make buckets full...Billons&#...
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Room 13 Writing: April 2008
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Friday, April 11, 2008. Welcome to the Room 13 Writers Blog. Welcome to the Room 13 writitng blog. Here we will be posting pieces of writing to be reviewed and commented on. These pieces of writing will be in draft from and your help is going to be needed to comment and critique in order tyo make our pieces of writing better. Subscribe to: Posts (Atom). Check out the Room 13 Class Blog Page. Http:/ room13balmacewen.blogspot.com. Our Kaikorai Stream Work Blog Page. Welcome to the Room 13 Writers Blog.
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Room 13 Writing: The Talking Cat - Sean Brosnahan
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Tuesday, June 17, 2008. The Talking Cat - Sean Brosnahan. Hi sean i thought your story was really funny it was funny when he walked of the cliff In thought it could have been longer. June 22, 2008 at 1:29 PM. Sean you story caught my attention. It created mystery at first. Loved to have read about what Bob may have seen, heard or smelt inside the tomb when the door slammed shut. I wonder how Bob was feeling. What type of cat appeared? Have you researched what cats the Ancient Egyptians kept?
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Room 13 Writing: Monkeys Don't Believe... - Mikaela Chettleburgh
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Tuesday, June 17, 2008. Monkeys Don't Believe. - Mikaela Chettleburgh. Character- A small monkey. Setting- A wild life park. Object- A glowing mirror. Topic- Animals against humans. Once there was a small monkey called Joey who lived in a wild life park with all his monkey friends called… billy, holly, molly. 8221; said Molly “ it is one of the most dearest mirrors in the WORLD! Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). Check out the Room 13 Class Blog Page. Http:/ room13balmacewen.blogspot.com.
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Room 13 Writing: July 2008
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Thursday, July 3, 2008. Ollie the Octopus - Meg McKay and Sarah Whitmore. He also attracted sharks because he glowed in the dark sea water. So he thought why doesn’t he get plastic surgery? Subscribe to: Posts (Atom). Welcome to the Room 13 writitng blog. Here we will be posting pieces of writing to be reviewed and commented on. These pieces of writing will be in draft from and your help is going to be needed to comment and critique in order tyo make our pieces of writing better.