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Feedback Friday: UNION by Joshua Lee Andrew Jones
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Thursday, May 23, 2013. UNION by Joshua Lee Andrew Jones. Thank you all for checking in on this week's edition of Feedback Friday. Joshua Lee Andrew Jones shares his futuristic science-fiction inspired by Odyssey. Union by Joshua Lee Andrew Jones. Reviewed by Erman Baradi. The ruling Excelsis, scientifically engineered humans, call upon a natural man with extraordinary talent to help quell an android rebellion on Mars in exchange for permission to marry. With this being a sci-fi set in the future you hav...
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Feedback Friday: Case #3756 by Lanny Helton
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Friday, July 12, 2013. Case #3756 by Lanny Helton. Sorry we have been quiet in the past week! Thank you for checking out this week's Feedback Friday review. This week, Lanny Helton shares the first 10 pages of his screenplay Case #3756. Reviewed by Erman Baradi. An unlikely pair of seasoned cops are caught in a serial killer’s diabolical scheme to humiliate their department and kidnap the object of his affection. Was definitely an enjoyable read. I suggest extending the dialogue a bit more so we get insi...
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Feedback Friday: Weekly Chat
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Sunday, January 4, 2015. I'll be launching a chatroom every Sunday night (9 EST, 6 PT) for anyone who wants to talk screenwriting. You can check it out here: Writers' Lab. I'm also thinking about bringing this blog back on a somewhat regular basis, to try and help screenwriters of all levels work on their craft and maybe get some exposure. Let me know in the comments (or via email) if you'd like to help out along with any ideas you may have for it. February 2, 2015 at 2:05 AM. 1601 by Louis Sangalli.
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Feedback Friday: Comic Book Heroes by Matthew Arnold Stern
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Friday, June 21, 2013. Comic Book Heroes by Matthew Arnold Stern. Thank you for checking out this week's Feedback Friday review. This week, Matthew Arnold Stern shares the first 10 pages of his screenplay Comic Book Heroes. By Matthew Arnold Stern. Reviewed by Erman Baradi. Logline: Four college roommates search for a famous comic book author who disappeared. It was a pleasure reading the first ten pages of your screenplay. Heroes. Was a fun read and I definitely would love to see where you go with this.
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Friday, April 25, 2014. In the aftermath of World War Three, a bio-mechanical man must regain his memory in order to provide hope to a dead world- before the establishment that created him silences him forever. April 26, 2014 at 6:23 PM. Lets start with the good:. For me, the best aspect of this script is the tech descriptions. They do a good job of providing me with a clear image of this futuristic tech. Now for the bad:. 1 Lack of information. Is she a Bionic Woman? Shes tied to an electronic panel.
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Feedback Friday: BRUISER (Short Film) by Mattson Tomlin
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Friday, October 11, 2013. BRUISER (Short Film) by Mattson Tomlin. Please make constructive comments. Anything mean spirited or malicious will be removed. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). There was an error in this gadget. ACTUAL DEATH EXPERIENCE by Cillian Daly. In the future, death is the new drug. So perfect are these Actual Death Experiences, they are made illegal. Now one scientist mu. 1601 by Louis Sangalli. BETWEEN EARTH AND SKY by Ivuoma Okoro. I AM CARLY CHEN by Jimmy Zhang. Improve your writi...
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Feedback Friday: IN THE YEARS OF SONDER by Sly Ada
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Friday, May 31, 2013. IN THE YEARS OF SONDER by Sly Ada. Hi folks, no review today but I'm excited to share the 1st 10 pages. S IN THE YEARS OF SONDER. A sci-fi actioner set in 2045, the story follows two idealistic, advanced humans whose lives get turned upside down when a research doctor hunts them for experimentation. If you'd like feedback on your 1st 10 pages email me (Rob) at: dillonscreenwriting at gmail dot com. May 31, 2013 at 11:03 AM. This script is off to a solid start. Good job. A shut-in, l...
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Feedback Friday: Guest Reviewers
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Jim Newman (Screenwriters Anonymous). Is a screenwriter, lover of movies, and enthusiastic reader/reviewer of scripts. If you find Jim's notes informative consider giving his. Director of Excecutive Relations for The Great American Pitchfest. Are you ready to take your script directly to decision makers? We are a boutique consultancy specializing in access to development executives at the best production companies and all the major studios. Visit our website here: screencraft.org. A story consultancy tha...
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Feedback Friday: Oscar Chat
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Sunday, February 22, 2015. If anyone's interested in a live chat, this room https:/ volafile.io/r/Vccldi. Will be open tonight and tomorrow night. I'll be there at 9:00 EST, but you can join any time. Also, if you're interested in checking out the Writers' Lab at it's new location:. Wiggio.com/group open joi…. Please make constructive comments. Anything mean spirited or malicious will be removed. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). There was an error in this gadget. ACTUAL DEATH EXPERIENCE by Cillian Daly.
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Feedback Friday: RECIPROCITY by Michael Gorrie
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Tuesday, May 14, 2013. RECIPROCITY by Michael Gorrie. Review of “RECIPROCITY”. Reviewed by Jim Newman. Posted May 14, 2013). Action, First 10 Pages). 8220;From what I’ve read, this reminds me of. Gone in Sixty Seconds. Clean writing, fast read, but some components fall short – but nothing that can’t be fixed with a second draft.”. Let’s kickoff with the logline:. Let’s identify the recommended elements of an effective logline:. The logline hits these chords:. 8211; Bank thief. 8211; Organized crime boss.
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