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Helium3: Chapter 1 - Traitor
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Thursday, 22 March 2007. Chapter 1 - Traitor. 8216;Wake up, Mervyn! 8217; He rubbed the sleep out of his fourteen-year-old eyes and stretched his aching muscles as far as his jumpsuit would allow. A thick shock of red curls swam into view. Loren thumped the side of his bunk again, ‘Wake up, Mervyn.’. She looked scared. 8216;Time to jump ship already? 8217; He knew she dreaded transfers. 8216;No, we need to hide.’. This hobby of yours has gone far enough. You are going to get a solid job in the mining...
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Helium3: Chapter 2 - Academy One
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Thursday, 22 March 2007. Chapter 2 - Academy One. Mervyn scrambled into his spacesuit, grabbed his helmet, and hefted his holdall. He had to keep moving, doing something, if he stopped to think what he was about to do fear might get the better of him. He tried not to think about the jump. Loren stomped after him, "Do we have to jump? Isn’t there another way to transfer ships? Please try not to stick,’ the Silvin whined, ‘ eet takes far too long to retrieve you. Time.". I’ll go first," Mervyn said b...
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Reviews of Helium3: Descriptions
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Reviews from some of the reader reviewers who provided feedback on the 4th draft. The revewers were aged 10 plus. Tuesday, 20 March 2007. I love your descriptions, especially the Ureg trees jostling for position to get the most light.". Posted by Nick Travers. Nick Travers On Writing.
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Reviews of Helium3: Compelling
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Reviews from some of the reader reviewers who provided feedback on the 4th draft. The revewers were aged 10 plus. Tuesday, 20 March 2007. I was up until gone midnight reading your darn novel, and I was late into work this morning because I just had to finish it.". Posted by Nick Travers. Nick Travers On Writing.
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Reviews of Helium3: More Please
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Reviews from some of the reader reviewers who provided feedback on the 4th draft. The revewers were aged 10 plus. Tuesday, 20 March 2007. I really liked the way every chapter ended on a cliff-hanger. When can I have the next one? Posted by Nick Travers. Nick Travers On Writing.
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NickTravers.com: Character Flaws
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A blog on novel construction, writing tips and the publishing world in general. Nick Travers is the author of Helium3, Helium3.1, Helium3.2, and Nina Swift:Gaias Brood adventure novels for young adults. Follow my current stories at:. Follow my current stories at:. Now, remove the cause of House’s irascibility and what do you have left? So what’s the lesson for us writers? We all know our main characters need flaws, but the failure of this episode demonstrates very clearly that our character’s flaws...
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NickTravers.com: 22-Nov-2013
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A blog on novel construction, writing tips and the publishing world in general. Nick Travers is the author of Helium3, Helium3.1, Helium3.2, and Nina Swift:Gaias Brood adventure novels for young adults. Follow my current stories at:. Follow my current stories at:. You have an idea for a scene in your story? Great, just dive in and write your heart out. When you’ve finished you sit back and relax, right? What is the protagonist looking for in this scene. Not normally necessary for a scene unless the scene...
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NickTravers.com: 23-Oct-2013
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A blog on novel construction, writing tips and the publishing world in general. Nick Travers is the author of Helium3, Helium3.1, Helium3.2, and Nina Swift:Gaias Brood adventure novels for young adults. Follow my current stories at:. Follow my current stories at:. The Hidden Story - Novel Writing Workshop 4. It’s one of the things that makes us human, which is amazing. We’re using a standard 7 point Story Arc. These are the steps on the way from the start of the story to the end:. The Protagonist has to ...