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Hello world! | Welcome to the zone...
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Welcome to the zone…. Just another WordPress.com weblog. About me. ( My I.D). Letter to the past. People watching ( stake-out). True and False story. Visual trigger. ( “feelin trigger happy” ). October 17, 2006. Welcome to WordPress.com. This is your first post. Edit or delete it and start blogging! One Response to “Hello world! October 17, 2006 at 8:37 am. Hi, this is a comment. To delete a comment, just log in, and view the posts’ comments, there you will have the option to edit or delete them.
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50 word stories. | Welcome to the zone...
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Welcome to the zone…. Just another WordPress.com weblog. About me. ( My I.D). Letter to the past. People watching ( stake-out). True and False story. Visual trigger. ( “feelin trigger happy” ). Tessa looked at her watch, and her frown came upon her face and she was about to look up, John her boyfriend hugged her from behind. She turned around and pushed him away and said, ‘its over”. She then slaps across the face and leaves the train station. We havent caught anything. Murder in the Inn. Inn manager sho...
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What makes me similar to Singaporeans my age? | (:, [: & :D
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What makes me similar to Singaporeans my age? January 9, 2007 @ 3:24 pm. 183; { Uncategorized. I have a blog excluding this. I have Msn. I converse in Singlish. I have friendster. I hang out at Junction 8 or town and watch alot of movies. I love spicy food. Anyway, those who are different from Singaporeans my age does not mean they are superior or ‘cooler’ than typical Singaporeans at my age. I can be a typical Singaporean but I’m different in a special way.😀. Leave a Reply Cancel reply.
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final draft. | Welcome to the zone...
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Welcome to the zone…. Just another WordPress.com weblog. About me. ( My I.D). Letter to the past. People watching ( stake-out). True and False story. Visual trigger. ( “feelin trigger happy” ). Hey, are you ok, a young woman says with slight huskiness. He nods and looks down before pushing himself up. He looks at the women and says, Umm, yeah, I am . He then faces the flames again. He breathes out deeply. The woman stands beside him. He turns to look at her and raises his eyebrow. Ken’s eyebrows contract...
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Week 8! | (:, [: & :D
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December 12, 2006 @ 3:46 pm. 183; { Uncategorized. I feel that the use of dialogues is a ‘short cut’ of telling a story and it will always be more interesting to watch an action instead of a dialogue. (For example: Mr. Bean! Although it is a comedy but it shows that actions are interesting.) However, dialogues can be appropriate at certain times. For example, I feel that putting in alot of effort to illustrate something not important in the film is a waste of time! Action speaks louder than words. Create...
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Openers | (:, [: & :D
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1 Minutes feel like seconds as Cheryl tries to unlock the room. 2 Vanessa tries to scream but no sound seem to be coming out of her mouth. 3 Wilfred’s eyes dart around the room with his heart beat accelerating. 4 A ripple of apprehension goes down Timothy’s spine. 5 Joseph stutters a little as he gave an introduction speech of himself. 6 Eileen’s vision blurs as the examination start. 7 Jocelyn is oblivious to Edmund who has been stalking her for days. 11 Grace shows no hint of awkwardness on her face.
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Week 13 | (:, [: & :D
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January 9, 2007 @ 5:05 pm. 183; { Uncategorized. The Craft of Writing. When in doubt, think nouns and verbs. 8211; Run dart, sprint, race. 8211; Hit cuff, pummel, brutalize. 8211; Speak chat, mumble, orate. Choose action over exposition. Don’t say the scene. (It’s raining). Tell us what people are doing in it. (Open up umbrella). Build energy with parallel constructions. 8211; “Speak softly and carry a big stick”. 8211; “A chicken in every pot, a car in ever garage”. Short sentences build suspense. It is...
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November | 2006 | Welcome to the zone...
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Welcome to the zone…. Just another WordPress.com weblog. About me. ( My I.D). Letter to the past. People watching ( stake-out). True and False story. Visual trigger. ( “feelin trigger happy” ). Lesson 5 Reflections and notes. November 27, 2006. Lesson 5, lesson 5. What can i say about lesson 5? Characters are the heart,soul and nervous system of your story. It is true your characters that viewers express emotions. And “Yoda” ( Ryan) said :-. Without characters, you have no action. Not a car of cause!
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Openers | Welcome to the zone...
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Welcome to the zone…. Just another WordPress.com weblog. About me. ( My I.D). Letter to the past. People watching ( stake-out). True and False story. Visual trigger. ( “feelin trigger happy” ). The sky begins to turn dark green and bolts of red lightning shoot down to the ground below. She slumps down against the alley wall as the moonlight bears down on her surroundings. The twins get up on the table their at and start dancing as whisky is served by the waiters. 2 Responses to “Openers”. A silver coin d...