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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 11/1/11 - 12/1/11
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Saturday, November 12, 2011. PALM BEACH, FLORIDA. I scanned the instrument panel. “Where and how much damage? 8220;Under the last window seat, left side, four-foot hole.”. 8220;We need to dive to a safe altitude. Everyone buckled in? 8220;Yes. Oxygen masks deployed. They’re putting them on now.”. 8220;I’m on it, Sam.” Lance pulled out the checklist and entered the emergency code. I scanned the gauges when we reached our target altitude. “We’re level at ten, ...8220;Good, I&...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: ANGRY ENOUGH TO KILL by Sheryl Dunn
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Sunday, February 8, 2015. ANGRY ENOUGH TO KILL. Oring Jeremias is tempted to turn back, but this decision is not reversible. No. She's come too far and given up too much. The time to reconsider is past. The fog forms and fades away, only to form again in different shapes, hunters.witnesses. Don't think. Just get it done. Nothing obstructs her view of the pathway leading from the town to the river. She rests her arms on the log, and waits. Something crawls up her neck. S...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: I MARY by Mike Hartner
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Friday, August 7, 2015. I looked upon the gray waters that surrounded me. To the west it was dark and cloudy, the wind blustering. But as I braced myself against the gale hitting full force against my peacoat, I smiled. It was fitting that I was here, and nothing could ever convince me otherwise. I’d been birthed on land but it wasn’t long afterward that I was on the water—and acquiring my sea legs. My parents taught me my numbers and to read and write as well. I recall all...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 2/1/14 - 3/1/14
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Tuesday, February 18, 2014. The Adventures of The Bronze Horsemen. I am Daven, lead hunter and second-in-command of the Botai. Bruno is our leader—our oldson—and my longtime friend. It was Scarman and the Smolens who drove us from our home village so long ago. 8221; Scarman sneered at me. I let Scarman suffer for some time before I ordered three men to bring kindling wood. They made a fire a short distance from my prisoner’s remaining foot. He watched as the f...I had no tr...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 11/1/12 - 12/1/12
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Friday, November 23, 2012. After a two-day honeymoon in Dublin, the happy couple moved into the back bedroom at the home of Sean’s parents. 8220;It’s just temporary, hon,” Sean said. “I’ll do better now that I have you.”. They were married three months when Hanora’s discovery filled her heart with joy. She was pregnant. But her joy and excitement soon faded as she realized the living conditions that awaited her baby. 8220;Sean, want to take a walk? The skinny child yelled t...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 1/1/13 - 2/1/13
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Monday, January 7, 2013. The cat snarled again. Brody scrambled backwards, knowing he was in for a painful death. He anticipated tearing claws and sharp teeth, but a deep, booming shot roared from close by, and he heard the heavy thump of the cat’s body going down. It squalled and kicked leaves and twigs, some of them hitting Brody on the arm. Then, the panther grew silent. My Papa, he’s found me. Just get me home. Take me to my Momma, so she can fix me. Bacon Hot, popping,...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 12/1/12 - 1/1/13
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Monday, December 3, 2012. Robert L. Bacon. The Perfect Write is now providing a. Of material up to 5,000 words). Paste your material to the to the body of an e-mail and send to theperfectwrite@aol.com. The Perfect Write offers comprehensive editing services, from manuscript critiques to complete revisions, including line-editing, along with query letter design and composition. For pricing, send your project requirements to theperfectwrite@aol.com. Saturday, December 1, 2012.
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 4/1/12 - 5/1/12
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Thursday, April 26, 2012. By Sue Chamblin Frederick. CHOPIN’S Piano Sonata No. 2. Though quite famous across Europe, the Spaniard’s name had never surfaced in the thousands of World War II espionage cases being worked at Whitehall, near London. The British Secret Intelligence Service had no idea the tall, thin Catalonian even existed…until their agent in Barcelona sent a coded message: the farmer is on holiday. THE Apartamentos Magnificos del Puerto de Barcelona. Juan obser...
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The Perfect Write® Free Manuscript Critique Blog: 4/1/13 - 5/1/13
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Free Manuscript Critique Blog. Monday, April 29, 2013. April 30, 2013. I, Walter Crofter, being of sound mind." Bah, this is garbage! I dipped the tip in the inkwell again, and wrote:. I agree, so tell the story that really means something. All of it." She sighed softly and placed the parchment she had been reading on the desk in front of me and kissed my cheek. The gleam in her eyes shed 20 years off her age and reminded me of a much gentler time. God, how much I love her. Father lived as a crofter shou...
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