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your first page: October 2010
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Saturday, October 30, 2010. The Substance Abuser's Wife. Half an hour ago I gave myself a fix. Did for Manhattan and cocaine in t...
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your first page: August 2010
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Sunday, August 22, 2010. At any rate, even in her hungover condition, she would find it familiar. (It also begs the question:...
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your first page: Smoke & Mirrors
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Monday, February 21, 2011. Some readers of this column will remember The Honeymooners,. In The Wizard of Oz. The prose—thou...
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your first page: February 2011
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Saturday, February 26, 2011. Context, we can't be blamed for imposing our own. Are they in his studio, or her boudoir? Everyone l...
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your first page: June 2010
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Wednesday, June 23, 2010. With this opening I lost confidence after the first paragraph. Some writers suffer from the mistaken no...
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your first page: September 2011
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Friday, September 9, 2011. About twenty authors submitted. During the conference these authors joined me in a large room pack...
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your first page: November 2010
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Wednesday, November 24, 2010. The opening sentence of this first page puts us in capable hands:. Posted by Peter Selgin. Displace...
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your first page: Brighter than Bright
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Monday, February 21, 2011. She tilts towards me, fingers glued to my leg, and talks and talks, but between the music and my pound...
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your first page: September 2009
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Your First Page is a craft forum to which authors are invited to submit the first pages of a works-in-progress (fiction or memoir) and get free critical feedback from me, along with comments from followers of the blog. NOTE: FOR BEST DISPLAY RESULTS USE FIREFOX BROWSER. Starting in January, 2011 "First Page" will be a regular column feature in The Writer Magazine. Look for it! Wednesday, September 16, 2009. The Paths of Eden. Stories have one subject, people, not rivers or geography. There was [a kitchen...