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Dandelion: September 2009
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Monday, September 28, 2009. So far, I have set up my blog for a week and I also have finished a brief essay about clothes .I am a little excited now. I was really moving when I saw you comments, because I could feel your great passion about teaching.And I was happy to get a relatively high score in final draft. Do you have some good suggestions? And could you tell me how to check my grammar? I do not want to see a low score caused by mistakes in grammar any more. Sunday, September 27, 2009. That moods,ou...
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Dandelion: October 2009
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Tuesday, October 27, 2009. The purpose of the essay is not only to tell readers the process of "the lottery",but also to reflect a kind of ugly social phenomenons. Was clear and sunny,with the fresh warmth of a full-summer day;the flowers were blossoming profusely and the grass was richly."Winning the lottery was supposed to be a happy thing,but ugly people made it be a sad story.This story showed the bad quality of people behind the lottery.So the writer started with the lottery. We will meet a lot of d...
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Dandelion: 34.fight for final
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Friday, December 04, 2009. Time flies.Final exams are coming. This was a really tiring week.I had two exams and an ESL essay.I spent a lot of time to try to write the essay as well as I can.And I had to review physics and chemistry.I didn't go to bed until 2 o'clock on Monday.But what made me happy was I got a pleasant score in Chemistry midterm. I told myself,"Fight for final! Fight for final.This is my gift for my parents. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). View my complete profile. Academic RC and Me.
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Dandelion: 30.prewriting
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Tuesday, November 24, 2009. With technology developing so fast,human clonging has been taken under the limelight.Some people support human cloning,but the others are object to it.In my opinion,it has more disadvantages than advantages it has. Disadvantage of human cloning:. 1It is an invasion of human rights. 2It breaks the nature rule. 3It will copy the bad gine again and again. 5This technology will cost a lot. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). View my complete profile. 25the blog I posted comments.
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Dandelion: 32.About first draft
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Tuesday, December 01, 2009. What was the most difficult part of writing the first draft of your essay? Looking for sourses with limited number. What part of your essay needs the most work? How can you improve this part? Paraphrasing and summarizing. I will consider about that more in my second draft. What would you like to get help with when we do the peer review on Wednesday? Help me to check if my citation is right.It is really tough. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). View my complete profile.
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Dandelion: November 2009
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Saturday, November 28, 2009. I spent the first Thanksgiving here during the four days here.I had expected it for a long time.My thanksgiving had a good start,but it had a little bad ending. Inside.Later,we went outside with other teenagers and kids to play.I tried to play ski board.It was a little hard for me to have a balance.After all ,I never played that before.It was time for dinner! Last,good luck for my test. Tuesday, November 24, 2009. Although,human cloning reperensents a big leap of development,...
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Dandelion: 37.final blog
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Tuesday, December 15, 2009. 1 What was your favorite part of this class? I like dicussion parts in the class most.Because in this part,I can communicate with members in my basic groups.We can exchange our ideas and work together to finish every task.Ｉcan learn a lot from others and I can get answers which I can't get by myself.It is also a way to develop friendship with different classmates in different basic groups. 3 What was the most important thing you learned in this class? Why was it important?
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Danyang's Minnesota life: 31. Thanksgiving and black Friday
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I'm from China. I like rock music. My favorite singer is Avril Lavigne! I like Twilight so much! View my complete profile. Wednesday, November 25, 2009. 31 Thanksgiving and black Friday. I won't feel lonely in Thanksgiving. This Friday is black Friday. My friends said to me that the first 100 people could get free itouchs and have a 1% coupon. They will sleep in the Mall Of America on this Thursday and wait for the coming Friday. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). The movie I have seen!
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Danyang's Minnesota life: 32. Essat Reflection
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I'm from China. I like rock music. My favorite singer is Avril Lavigne! I like Twilight so much! View my complete profile. Thursday, December 3, 2009. This is not my first time to write the argumentative essay. Before this ESL class, most of my essays' style are argumentative. Especially for TOEFL and SAT exams. Actually, I'm not good at writing argumentative essays, because my knowledge is really limited. I'm aware that I have read little books. Compared to the literature fictions, I prefer. Although I ...
